required more description, more attention to values and more attention to color temperature. The long horizontal format is a bit of a different animal. In working from left to right, I found that I was losing energy toward the end. Fatigue sets in. Things must be harmonized. After the first pass, there was an abundance of dark values on the left....much lighter on the right. This must all be balanced, in addition to beginning to set up a rhythm between the forms. At this point, I was also determining which edges needed to be hard, and which soft. It is definitely more difficult to achieve an all-over harmony given this format. Carry on.